I'm working on more pictures of the characters from the Castle series. Here's one FTW! Please post comments about what you think of it!
http://drakkigirl.deviantart.com/art/Etrius-136290803

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I'm working on more pictures of the characters from the Castle series. Here's one FTW! Please post comments about what you think of it!
http://drakkigirl.deviantart.com/art/Etrius-136290803
Hmm, you seem to know how to pose stickmen.
It looks okay, but the background needs something more.
Last edited by TheOnlyHorse; September 8th, 2009 at 06:19 AM. Reason: Grammar failure
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Yeah, I know, I just didn't have any good ideas at the time. My next project is going to be Beecher, and I'll give the background a little more umph than the one Etrius had. I wanted to put in some of the Evils, but my mouse didn't feel like cooperating with me, so I had to leave them out...Sorry for the disappointment.
As for the pose, I've had practice. I like to make animations with stick figures, so I've had practice with messing around with different poses and such. Once my tablet comes in, I should be able to do more than what Pivot can hand me.![]()
Thats awsome man keep it up!
Thank you very much!![]()
not bad
maybe put some glowing eyes behind him or something
She's like the village bicycle:
She reminds me of a time when people still trusted each other.
I'm planning on fixing it once I get my tablet. I'll put a stone floor beneath him and the eyes in the shadows.
you need to work on the background, but the rest is all ok!
"All moments are fleeting, just like all love is true." Victory
Great work! The background need to be fixed a little... but the rest are fine
Keep it up!![]()
while we're on the topic of castle art- is that elite team in your sig Nox?
She's like the village bicycle:
She reminds me of a time when people still trusted each other.
The body looks a little small compared to the head, but, I actually like it. Maybe it's because of the lack of good castle art we've had here for a while, but all the same it's good. I also like the dramatic sentences![]()
Looks quite nice. Head looks pretty big, but maybe that's just me. =)
I was aiming for him to look like he was in a crouch, and I wasn't too sure how long to make his back, since he's facing forward and bent over at the same, so I pretty much just winged it. But hey, if you guys like it, thanks bunches for not flaming! I know the background could use some work, but I'm waiting for my tablet to come in so I can add a stone floor and some nice glowing Evil eyes behind him.
He looks too gray IMO.
too grey? o.O Oh well, everyone is entitled to their opinion...
The Castle series are by themselfs too gray.
"All moments are fleeting, just like all love is true." Victory
Yeah, the grey adds atmosphere and a dynamic feel to the series. I love when people make animations that are more grey and black than enything, because too much color confuses the eyes.
It's like a sweeny todd look. mostly dark colors... and blood red.
"All moments are fleeting, just like all love is true." Victory
Once you get a tablet you can never go back.
I quite like the shadow work you've done around the head and your sense for anatomy is so-so.
The fuzzy edges are ruining it along with your incomplete sense of perspective -- Don't get me wrong, you do have a sense of perspective but your knowledge on this subject still isn't coming to you naturally yet. Its the feet and legs I'm mainly concerned about in this matter.
I'm glad you listen to comments about backgrounds and so on, but here's another good tip: Don't fix this picture. Trust me, if you're going to keep this you'd later rather see you don't fix it but instead make something new where you include and all your newly-gained advise and experience.
Its called progress -- Being able to see the timeline from square one to where you've gotten to now is valuable for you when you need motivation to become better.
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This is a Master speaking.
"All moments are fleeting, just like all love is true." Victory
Thanks for the info! I'll heed your words and just apply better skills to my future projects. I'm currently working on a picture of Beecher, so I hope to get that done sometime later today or tomorrow.
Ok will you add a sniper to?
'course he will. He HAS to!
No matter how hard it is.
"All moments are fleeting, just like all love is true." Victory