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    DQ 1337 Member Zackie's Avatar
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    Default THe Legend Preview!!!!!!

    Father's Day's gift? Maybe

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    Tell me your comments and VOTE VOTE VOTE!
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    I think that some things in the flash are a bit too shakey. For instance the helicotors and the heads of people. The helicoptors look like they're going to crash any second and some of the people look like bobble-head dolls at some times.

    Other than that I'd say you've done very very well.

    And BTW before you ask....I voted five

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    shakey and voicing was bad, 5.
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    thanks a lot, i'll really put in a lot of effort, so much that it laggs XD
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    I think you have improved alot with the movements on the sticks, but the voice acting was rubbish and some other parts i think you could have done better. But still its good and i like that you are getting better!

    Voted 4

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    First off, why is the time in the preloader? eh. w/e
    alright. so.

    The menu, could use some improvements, not a fan of that gradient at the top.

    The scrolling text, its a little too fast, i had to read it fairly quickly.

    The helicopters a pretty cool, just not too much a fan of the red glow round them, just me though.

    For some reason there are white bars on the top and bottom that randomly flash in, could be a problem with your letterbox object.

    When the guy is waving his arms in a kinda "go go go" type motion, he disappears for frames at a time. Thats just poor editing right there.

    The voice acting in general is kind of poor, but then again its not like i was expecting pro acting.

    So overall that preview was kind of confusing, at the beginning it seemed less like a preview and more like the first minute of the movie. So just polish up some things, improve/fix some others, and the movie should turn out alright.

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    OMG, i got an average score/!?!?
    Are you guys certain that my animation's good? Cause it sure doesn't seem like it.
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    I must say I wasn't as impressed as I thought I would be. The voicing was really bad, you should tone done one the effects, too much lag, and I could keep on complaining but I won't. You've got the right idea, it's just you need a little touching up to do on it first. Hope the whole thing turns out really good.
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    you guys mean the voices actually killed the entire animation?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zackie View Post
    you guys mean the voices actually killed the entire animation?
    Exactly...

    Everything looks good except the voice acting.

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    ...but on the bright side, this preview left me wanting more. I don't have any sound on the computer, so that might be it. Glad to see you've toned down on the choice of colours. You're improving, keep it up and you might have loyal fans one day.

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    I should like sit down and make an animation some time. But anyways, this was alright, voices killed it, the art was gradients and shit, the animation was a little too fast and choppy for my liking, but it was cinematic, so points for that.
    I didn't vote, but you would get a 3.

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    Alright, i should get an audition for voice actors. But it looks weird without voices though.

    Anyone wanna voice act?
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    Default i would voice act if i had a mic lol

    Quote Originally Posted by Zackie View Post
    Alright, i should get an audition for voice actors. But it looks weird without voices though.

    Anyone wanna voice act?
    i would really like to voice act if i had a microphone, but im only 14 years old it would sound wierd if a 14 years has the same voice as a stick soldier, but if you need me for somethin just ask, i would be glad if you could

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