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    DQ 1337 Member Ducky's Avatar
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    I like the sounds you used to make this song, but for me the largest area that needs to change is repetition. For most of the song, the same chunks of bars play over and over with only the drum pattern changing, and that gets old very quickly.

    I strongly recommend that you vary that piano melody and that synth that comes in later a bit more frequently.
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    pretty spooky. maybe turn the tempo down a little?

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