Something Sci-Fi

[Zolen]

Okay remember when I said that I started QuickStart for my own personal improvement? Yes turns out Radasus, the artist of the comic I am writing for wants to do that as well, so I write the narration like I do in QuickStart but he does the art. I encourage you to participate in this, but also to please keep throwing suggestions at QuickStart, now the rules are pretty much the same.


Rules to remember for this one are almost the same as in QuickStart:
1. Keep all posts relevant to the story, no off topic chatter.
2. Keep story movements short and concise, no massive paragraphs detailing the next 100 years. It's much, much for run that way.
(e.g. "Pick up the spoon and lick it." vs. "Pick up the spoon and lick it, decide it tastes terrible so through it against the window opening a vortex and sucking Dave into the unknown.")
3.The story is ran based on what people want to happen, so make suggestions, even if you think they are stupid. I will base the images on popular vote, or what seems the most amusing to draw out.
4.If nobody reacts in a few days I/ or the artist will just make our own choice or choose from things people suggested in the past, if there are any worth noting.
5. Most everything will look quickly drawn just as in QuickStart, but because this is a proper artist it will look a bit cooler.
6. There are three commands that you can use that are not going to be mentioned in the comic one is "be -insert word/name/ect- to temperately or until you choose another be another character from the story as they are introduced, to go from their perspective, which I will probably will have set a few hours to a day behind the main character in order to sort of have plot filler. One is "Stats list" which shows things you have done, how much money you have, what time it is, and attacks and so on that the character you are viewing has at the moment. The last can only be used once every 10 pages called "review" where I will give a summery of everything that has happened so far since the last review.
Simply say it and it will happen unless something is preventing it. (for example you can not be parents or pets and any time you want to be a inanimate object it will only be for one page, unless something epic had just happened to that object or you want to tell it to do something, you can not have a review when it has only been 3 pages, you can not look at your stats list if you are currently a inanimate object)



lets get started!
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he/she pushes he/she's self out of the wreckage that was once he/she's ship, a vast landscape of mountains and yellow tree's as far as the eye can see...he/she....wait...he/she dosen't even remember what gender he/she is? Quick remember he/she's name! This is just creepy.

[Shinoi]

Hermaphrodite, named Yohan Twogender.

[Mattbot]

It's not actually a person, It is a robot damaged from the crash. All it finds name wise is a code name etched onto it's armour reading PROFIT

[Zolen]

"It's not actually a person, It is a robot damaged from the crash. All it finds name wise is a code name etched onto it's armour reading PROFIT"

"Hermaphrodite, named Yohan Twogender."



This is just horrible, he/she is pretty sure, he/she is not a robot, and he/she while not clear on gender is sure he/she is not a Hermaphrodite, named Twogender, this...this is just horrible, you should be ashamed.

Try again

[Mattbot]

You:"3.The story is ran based on what people want to happen, so make suggestions" Keep going


Unable to comprehend the truth laid out before it, Profit begins staggering aimlessly into the wasteland.

[Wadling]

I thought the robot idea was cool...

[Zolen]

You:"3.The story is ran based on what people want to happen, so make suggestions" Keep going


Unable to comprehend the truth laid out before it, Profit begins staggering aimlessly into the wasteland.

:/ true those are my rules, but I am just narrating based on what the artist in question wants so meh. "I will base the images on popular vote, or what seems the most amusing to draw out." if the artist does not see it at amusing and a vote has not been made for one name or another then he has the right to say no. Also the artist said: "It's obviously not a robot, it has gloved hands for fuck's sake!"

:/

Edit: "I thought the robot idea was cool... "

I said that to him to actually...

but....the point of the helmet and everything was for you to get to choose gender and name, that armor is removable.

[Mattbot]

Well it did get the popular vote but whatever, good luck to you. From the sounds of it though, you should probably just draw a comic instead.

[Zolen]

Meh, I am just writing the narration, all i can say is he really does not seem like he prepared for a robot. But might as well try again so that this moves along so that it does not distract me from the fun that is known as writing.

[Rimmy]

I vote for a female named Ann

[CobaltBlue]

I agree with Mattbot. :/

[Zolen]

Now he says he doesn't want to do it :/ I don't think he prepared for things not going exactly as he planned. :/ Meh my own comic QuickStart is still going though, so no problem for me. Sorry if you wanted a choose your own adventure drawn by a better artist then me.