Alright guys, I finished the first page of my comic. Sorry TOH, the lines are supposed to sketchy and imperfect.
Not much going on at first, of course.
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Alright guys, I finished the first page of my comic. Sorry TOH, the lines are supposed to sketchy and imperfect.
Not much going on at first, of course.
Lookin' hot so far.
Can't wait for more
This comic is giving me a weird feeling that I can't exactly put my finger on.
Looks nice though =)
I'm liking it so far. Keep up the good work KD.
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Looking good so far. I like it.
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Last edited by kronosdragon; March 21st, 2011 at 01:43 PM.
Hmm, I like how the story is coming along. But KD, you should really clean up the lineart, at least the lines that separate the panels. That's a minimum!
But keep drawing : D
Harald <3
Looks great! Can't wait for the next pages!
I'm liking it =3
Keep going with this one Kronos, I'm liking the looks of it so far =3
Thanks for the support guys, I'm glad you like it (even though it's only 3 pages in
Page 4
You have a good atmosphere in your art, that's good. Keep doing that
Everything's too fast paced, and it jumps back and forth too much. You should've finished the scene in the office with the military stuff before even introducing the other characters. Jumping back and forth between different characters in every single frame makes it tedious and rather frustrating to follow.
While I agree with Victory's point about it jumping back and forth too much, I am still enjoying it quite a bit. Keep up the good work.
Looks really good so far.
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Sorry for page stretch butOriginally Posted by kronosdragon
Why is that comic supposed to be sketchy and imperfect? It's either lazyness or the fact that you can't do the basics. I'll change my mind if you show us a comic page that contains the tips I showed above ;)
(No you don't need a fancy tablet to achieve decent lineart)
Last edited by TheOnlyHorse; March 30th, 2011 at 06:33 PM.
Harald <3
Awesome, lovin what you got so far ^^
Yes?
Liking it so far but you would do well to listen to the constructive comments of Vic, and even to the somewhat less constructive comments of TOH actually.
I am, to an extent. I didn't realize that I annoyed you all so much with my sketchiness.
The sketchiness doesn't really bother me, but for what its worth, I thought the last page posted was less sketchy than the others.
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