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unfair
March 17th, 2006, 10:39 PM
http://img222.imageshack.us/my.php?image=land7aw.swf
please rate

fedora
March 17th, 2006, 10:42 PM
the blood sux

Netrosis
March 17th, 2006, 10:46 PM
I'd give it a

2/10

Mostly because of its complete lack of any originiality, style or

even any sort of graphical greatness.

It wasn't smooth, I ran it 3

times just to check!

Blood was one colour and a few splatters. To be

honest, its all nothing special, nothing worthy of any good rating.

It

may not be complete shit, but its not any good either.

I suggest you

also read up on animating physics if you're going to do something like this.

Learn how things interact with their surroundings, and vice versa. Give your

sticks more detail, yes it takes more time but it gives you a unique style.

Jaded
March 18th, 2006, 03:32 AM
I liked how you made the stick character move, but

unfortuately the blood was pretty crappy.

IceBreaker
March 18th, 2006, 04:26 AM
2.7/10

Yeah, it was ok but you should work on the blood at the

end.

`seCks
March 18th, 2006, 10:04 AM
yea wot they said but i'd give it a 4/10 - the

blood was shiit, the overall movement was smoothish cud do betta, um style

well brush drawn sticks have been arounda while n' the "look" was simmlar 2

other ppls. but still not bad, tips wud be um better blood -

http://www.deletionquality.net/tut-blood.php
more persoanlised style and

just keep at it, ur not shit i pretty sure u can do betta - good luck wid

later work :P

VipER X
March 18th, 2006, 02:48 PM
the blood was shit. period. but i

loved the camera shaking with the movements! blood: 1/10, movements: 7.8/10