stick crisis

[Fu]

I've been on

it and off (mostly off) for about at least a year or so, and I only done this

much, my friends are all annoyed and stuff but I have SO much stuff to

do.
http://img345.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stickcrisis7db.swf

[VipER X]

its cool and please finish it! it looks good!

[jocki]

good,

just need some sound's =) great job

[paolo_viper]

Dont twee the

walking please.the 3d was nice but 7/10

[t231]

Dont twee the walking please.

ya try doing

the walks fbf usually looks better if you take your time.

You should

fiinish, there wasnt really much animation so i could really tell if it was

good or not.

5/10 :P finish and add sound

[Fu]

Dont twee the walking

please.

ya try doing the walks fbf usually looks better if you

take your time.

You should fiinish, there wasnt really much animation

so i could really tell if it was good or not.

5/10 :P finish

and add sound
DAMN I spent so much time on the walking. the sound

im going to add later, for now i need to finish the animation and find a good

music to fit it, if not, then I'll need to get some help.

[Netrosis]

Im going to honest here, it

sucks.

Its not original at all. Everything is very slow and cliche.

The walking was pretty bad, his arms and legs don't move in unison the way

you had them.

Graphically, it was also poor. No backgrounds, even

whatever you had on the foreground lacked any kind of formal and personal

details.

the characters were stiff and rigid, and were animated that

way, as well as having no personality or expression, this doesn't help at

all. Having no sound didn't help out either, it makes it difficult to

understand dialogue without the voices, and no music to set the

mood.

The storyline itself was predictable, man with his security

surveillance, guy walks in with gun like a badass.

If you're doing an

action movie, undoubtedly you've watched some yourself, and this is where

the inspiration is coming from, watch and study some of these movies, take

notes, pause the movie and make some quick sketches of scenes, backgrounds,

objects, and positions that the characters are in, this will help you look at

them and convert that into your own style and put it in your

animations.

If you have any further questions, feel free to ask.

[IceBreaker]

I thought I was watching a "Silent Movie" there for a

minute.

2/10.............[/b]

[A.M.]

Dude that blew.

[Fu]

Im going to honest here, it sucks.

Its not

original at all. Everything is very slow and cliche. The walking was pretty

bad, his arms and legs don't move in unison the way you had them.



Graphically, it was also poor. No backgrounds, even whatever you had

on the foreground lacked any kind of formal and personal details.

the

characters were stiff and rigid, and were animated that way, as well as

having no personality or expression, this doesn't help at all. Having no

sound didn't help out either, it makes it difficult to understand dialogue

without the voices, and no music to set the mood.

The storyline

itself was predictable, man with his security surveillance, guy walks in with

gun like a badass.

If you're doing an action movie, undoubtedly

you've watched some yourself, and this is where the inspiration is coming

from, watch and study some of these movies, take notes, pause the movie and

make some quick sketches of scenes, backgrounds, objects, and positions that

the characters are in, this will help you look at them and convert that into

your own style and put it in your animations.

If you have any further

questions, feel free to ask.

Netrosis the storyline isn't

gonna be like that at all, as this movie is still in production, you will

have no idea about how it's going to turn out.

And in this movie I'm

not going to spend much time on the backgrounds either, because I already

have another movie to work with once I finish this one.

To answer to

you comments on the sound, music and voices, I will make it clear once again,

this is an UPCOMING MOVIE, and since this release, I have edited a large

number of things.

Thanks for the constructive comments, I will work on

them as soon as possible, as people like you are very important for producing

a good movie.

Since so many people commented on the tweened walking, I

will do it fbf, now stay tuned and be ready for the release of this movie

:wink:

Thanks to all of you for commenting on my movie!

[A.M.]

yeah you should have had noise, I know it takes a little extra

work, and yeah the no background thing didn't help either

[Fu]

yeah you should have had noise, I know it

takes a little extra work, and yeah the no background thing didn't help

either

Okay, you obviously didn't read the above post, to

make this clear the THIRD time, I'm doing the noise

AFTER the movie is done! And the no background thing?

wtf dude?

I'm not trying to flame people for saying my movie sucks

major hairy squishy balls, but they should at least read what I say before

going on about things I have already explained, it's like in the post about

a dq fake, the guy already explained what happened in his second post and

then people were flaming him still about the exact things he explained!

Seriously, read the post before you reply!

[Fu]

I thought I was watching a "Silent Movie" there for a

minute.

2/10.............[/b]

thanks for the

constructive comments [/sarcasm]

[IceBreaker]

I thought I was watching a "Silent

Movie" there for a minute.

2/10.............[/b]

thanks

for the constructive comments [/sarcasm]

Sorry, the day i said

that i was sick (Had The Fluw) could'nt think straight, when the full movie

come out i'll be more "Constructive" :)

[A.M.]

I was agreeing with the other people

dumbass

[Fu]

Dude that blew.


I was

agreeing with the other people dumbass

Apart from expressing

your own sad crap opinion which nobody cares about, you're also spamming up

the forum with pointless posts that does nothing but to hurt people's eyes

with your rubbish.

If you want to argue with me, don't do it on this

forum we don't want to see shit.

[A.M.]

dont get mad cause it sucked dude

[Fu]

lol I'm not the one

getting mad dude, you are, saying it sucked matters nothing to me, especially

when the words are coming out of the mouth of you.

[Atomic]

I'm being serious, i would have had more fun watching my plants grow. I

knew it was bad when i read the title which was extemely unoriginal. And yeah

you need a background, the title stick crisis was up for far too long in the

intro. And i say it shouldn't get more than a 4.

[Fu]

ok

dude, you made your point, thanks for your comment