[Flash]Sunset Valley,Short but sweet, wat do you think?

[Devastation]

This is the

first animation i ever completed,its actualy a sample for

www.chrome-arrow.com, ya i want to be in the Massacre 3 so the big chees over

there wanted a sample and here it is. it must be know that i messed up the

gunfire and that i did this in 17 hours flat. please give me constructive

critisism as to what was wrong with it (i know...alot) and what i should have

done( other than the gunfire part) well i hope you like it. the link

is:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/290050

[Bjarmi]

cool.. i like'd it.. i see that you dont

have very much exp of flash but it was grate..! keep it up!

[Oscar]

You should set the music

to stream. It'll make the size smaller and it'll go along with the

animation.

It's pretty good btw (Y)

[Devastation]

Thanx guys, ill take that into account, watch out

for my next animation, it will be much better, thanx again! =-)

[VipER X]

i think you should add

in more action and more movement

[eQb]

Heh It was ok, but 17 hours for this? How long have you been animating?

[VipER X]

i think it was his

first

[JJ]

better than my flash

junk, good job, but the music was a little crappy, and the sound qulaity was

a little poor... other than that good job

[Zuka]

It was good for a first

time.

[Devastation]

lol yes its my first animation, im glad some of you liked it,your critisism

has definatly helped, my next one will be much better lol i hope

[NooDLeS]

i liked it

[Devastation]

well im glad you

liked it nooDLeS, but to everyone i didnt get into Massacre 3 (im not

surprised :-/) but maybe the massacre 4 ill be better than, well thanx for

all the good tips

[jonathan12375]

its good

[Maddermadcat]

You bumped a 3-year-old thread to say "its good?" Really?

[riku1gundam]

LOL now i cant resist now that someone bumped this Thread. imma wathcit when i get home since school blocks it.

i was reading all these posts and they were all 2005 joiners xD i was like WT)Q@#*$*&@#Q*($? then is aw the date of the posts lol

[Tawl]

Fuck sake. How do people find these?