[art] ... some art. (wee, I added the coloured version!)

[kookycrazycat]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v244/Cat_Assasin_of_Linx/sleeping_alo

ne_smaller.jpg


... yeah, just sketched it 2 minutes ago. Go

me. Crits are nice, unless they're about hands... I know I suck.

Meh.

And, no rude comments. I've had enough shit today from those in

real life and I really don't need it

here...


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v244/Cat_Assasin_of

_Linx/sleeping_alone.png

Muahaha, I added a coloured version. Go

me. Don't mind the lineart- I have to draw with a mouse (my parents are too

cheap for tablets. Meh). What do you think?

BTW- the strange, squiggly

things is my lame grass. Go me.

Ah, fuck- I forgot the "l" in my name

>__>

[Cece]

Could use a bit more work on the anatomy, but its okay for a

simple sketch.

[vegetax6]

i

think its realy good besides hands but belive me i draw to and i know how

hard hands are and wemon are extremly hard to draw so thats pretty damn good

.
good job.

[rezuth]

Could use a bit more work on the anatomy, but its okay for a

simple sketch.
Dont go there :roll:

[Oscar]

Make some shadows or something :)

[rezuth]

its

great thought

[Cparty]

I like it, pretty cool style keep it up and post

more rawr

[kookycrazycat]

Oscar, it's just

a sketch XD I haven't done anything with it yet!

Thanks for the nice

comments ^^ I'll post more... when I have the time.

[Netrosis]

Great work! Always good to see people drawing more

manga.

Anyway, I am going to give you some constructive critisism if

you don't mind.

Hopefully next time you're sketching you'll see

what I mean

Overall its a good sketch, you got alot of things right,

but its just the perspective of the body I think you got wrong.

Her

shoulders are not aligned, if you get your hand, and sortof feel the kind of

length the neck is, generally, girls have longer revealed necks than guys, in

manga, and also that she isn't wearing a collared shirt, rather a more of a

skivy sortof thing.

Is she facing upwards or sideways? I figured she

is resting her head on its side, hence no need to display all of her face,

one half should do it. The way you drew it, im sure you know you can see she

has a rather wide face/chin. Which is also shown as the hair also is

wide.

General figure is good, good arm lengths and arm

figures.

Using your picture as reference I sketched and then coloured

her in so you can see what I mean.

I also made her hair more flowing,

and also covering her face a bit more, I hope you don't mind

either.

http://i13.photobucket.com/albums/a298/netrosis/kookycraz

ykat_help.png

If you want some more help don't hesitate to ask

questions.

[kookycrazycat]

It might help if

I add that when I originally drew this pic... she was dancing xP

But,

I was in a depressed mood o_o So now she's lying down. Weee xP

But,

yeah, good crits ^^

Some people seem to think it's saying 'lyk OMG

you suxors you shouldn't draw!!11!' >__> Annoying...

[Netrosis]

It

took me a long time to get near I was, stick to it and you'll become a great

artist!

You've certainly got the attitude.

And I can now see

that she was supposed to be dancing, hehe.

[kookycrazycat]

Hence the

fucked up shoulder/hip placement XD

Heeey... I'm actually computer

editing this godforsaken picture, any ideas on colours? >__>

[rezuth]

how about nude?

[Oscar]

User Rezuth once again

banned

[kookycrazycat]

Huh, if only Oscar >__> *kicks Rezuth*

[rezuth]

Huh, if only Oscar >__> *kicks

Rezuth*
Hahe, Cant you get some more art? Its actully pretty

nice

[Structuraldefect]

User Rezuth once again banned
lol but is

Rezuth a bot or something cause how can he/she have such a high post count?

[Netrosis]

he administrated the mySQL database and edited his post count

manually.

[kookycrazycat]

... if you want to see more of my art go to:

http://kookycrazycat.deviantart.com

[Long_Haired_Buddy]

Anyhow. I agree witha tha Rezuth. More

work. It's nice.

[kookycrazycat]

Thank you =^^= HUGS ALL AROUND! *hug*